The Irrational National Anthem

The national anthem is the one song every American singer is most likely to sing in public, certainly as long as there are sporting events on the horizon. “Happy Birthday” may rival it in popularity, but that’s usually a group effort. With “The Star-Spangled Banner,” you are left to your own devises—and expected to sing it a cappella, no less! No wonder it terrifies singers.

The range is so wide (an octave and fifth) that most singers can barely scan the notes. What’s more, the phrasing invites the singer to breathe at inappropriate junctures.

Written by Francis Scott Key after witnessing the all-night bombardment of Fort McHenry by the British Royal Navy ships in Chesapeake Bay during the War of 1812, the poem was set to the tune of a popular British song written by John Stafford Smith.

I’d like to provide some tips for taming the beast, starting with the words. Do you realize there are only two sentences in the entire song? And that the first sentence is probably the longest sentences in the history of sentences? Nevertheless it does actually mean something. It’s not just a bunch of gibberish—the words tell a story that makes sense if you phrase it correctly.

The Sentence Begins

“Oh, say,” Hey you guys over there.

can you see,” What can you see from your vantage point?

“by the dawn’s early light,” Now that the sun’s come up.

“what so proudly we hailed at the twilight’s last gleaming,”

That flag that we are so proud of was still visible on the fort ramparts as daylight faded.

“whose broad stripes and bright stars, through the perilous fight o’er the ramparts we watched were so gallantly streaming,” During the battle we tried to see if the flag was still flying.

The Sentence Continues

“and the rocket’s red glare, the bombs bursting in air,” Every time a bomb burst,

“gave proof through the night that our flag was still there.”

End of First Sentence

Now remember, that was ONE sentence. And, not written in Albanian. In English (well, English as it was spoken two hundred years ago.)

Second and Final Sentence

“Oh, say, does that star-spangles banner yet wave,” Is our flag still flying over the fort this morning? Were we victorious in battle?

“o’er the land of the free and the home of the brave?” Over our new country?

So, when you phrase the anthem to fit the contours of the meaning of the words, you will find that you sing with the commas instead of just anywhere.

Example: Sing “Oh say, [breath] can you see…”

NOT “oh, say can [breath] you see…

To interrupt ‘can” and ‘you’ is unnatural phrasing

Very few people sing the national anthem like they believed in it. If you sing it to honor the sacrifices of those who have fought for our freedom, then you should do it well.

And, you know, it’s funny how just thinking about what the words mean makes your tone sound better.

Check out this video of Renee sing/speaking the Star Spangled Banner and explaining her techniques.

If you enjoyed this blog article it’s just a small sampling of my really cool digital on-line flipbook The Art Of Singing check it out here.

Comments are not only welcome, but encouraged.



2018-10-22T18:36:00+00:00October 22nd, 2018|


  1. Thomas Sexton October 23, 2018 at 1:06 pm - Reply

    I think I was there at that work shop. I learned so much from breaking down that song how it applies to all songs. I’m really enjoying working with Renee currently as many of the techniques
    I’ve learned are manifesting themselves. Renee is one of those special people if your lucky you meet in your lifetime.

    • emconline October 24, 2018 at 3:12 pm - Reply

      Hi Tom, I think you may have been at this one too. I was my last one. I’m enjoying working with
      you on this current project as well as those in the past. You have some great songs and you do
      an excellent job. I can’t wait to hear the finished project.

  2. david nelson October 23, 2018 at 4:10 pm - Reply

    So good! A friend who sings this makes everybody wince…

    • emconline October 24, 2018 at 3:10 pm - Reply

      Hi David, I hope you will share my article with your friend. Renee

  3. Michael Snellings October 23, 2018 at 4:40 pm - Reply

    Great. Now if anyone asks me to sing it. I’m all prepared. Thanks Renee

  4. Michael Snellings October 23, 2018 at 4:41 pm - Reply

    Great. Now I’m all prepared

    • emconline October 24, 2018 at 3:09 pm - Reply

      Hi Michael, I’m thrilled you liked the blog article. I hope you are doing well.

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